I like Lipton very much. It is a kind of the tea. But When I was a junior high school student, I drank it for the first time. I didn’t like it then. But When I was a high school student, I drank it again. And I felt that it was really delicious. Then it becomes my favorite tea. By the way, do you know “koutyakaden”? It is a tea too. I like koutyakaden as well as Lipton. So I sometimes drink it! It was good. But I like Lipton the best. My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured. So I am going to tell you about this Lipton today!
First, I am going to introduce about the origin. This Lipton was made by Sir Thomas Lipton. He was born in 1848 at Glasgow. He is an entrepreneur and innovator. He went to Glasgow alone. After he returned, he opened the food’s shop. In the 1890’s he visited in Sri Lanka and handled the tea. He was involved in charity volunteer work. In other words, he contributed to the group. His action was accept to Queen of Victoria. Then he was called “Sir Thomas Lipton”.
Next, Lipton tea is great tasting and good for our health. Tea contains some substance. For example, tannin, teanin, caffeine and so on. This caffeine is good for our health. So it also is effective in diet.
Finally, there are many kinds of Lipton. For example, Peach Tea, Milk Tea, Lemon Tea, Straight Tea, Pink Grapefruit Tea, Ice Chocolate Milk Tea, Apple Tea, Muscat Tea and so on. I sometimes drink Peach Tea, Milk Tea, Lemon Tea, Pink Grapefruit Tea and Apple Tea. I like Apple tea the best of all. But I’ve never drunk the Straight Tea, Ice chocolate Milk Tea and Muscat Tea. So I want to try them next time! If you have never drunk the Lipton, please try it someday. I recommended you to drink it. Lipton is really good tea.
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Asaki...
"Asaki said she likes tea with milk, and asked about my favorite. My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured."
Mie...
"Mie said she likes Lipton too, and asked about koutyakaden.
I like koutyakaden as well as Lipton. So I sometimes drink it! It was good."
chika...
"Chika said she likes Lipton with lemon, and about my favorite. My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured."
mizuho...
"Mizuho said she have never drunk Lipton, and she wants to try it. So I recommend her drinking Lipton with apple-flavoured. It is really delicious"
Ayaka...
"Ayaka said she likes Lipton too, and asked about my favorite. My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured."
Nami...
"Nami said she didn't like Lipton, but she like it now. And she asked my favorite .
My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured."
chi-chan...
"Chi-chan asked my favorite. My favorite Lipton tea is apple-flavoured."
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Hi Sayaka,
返信削除The brief notes that you've added to the tail-end of your essay are more suitable for replies to comments on the original post (1-02a) than as revisions of a formal essay (website review).
For revision of your essay, the assignment called for:
"Additional information requested or suggested by classmates and peers who commented on your first draft (1-02a, 2010.05.19), _composed within_ existing or new paragraphs of the essay" (1-02b: May 24 calendar event description).
By "within paragraphs ... of the essay," I meant "within [body] paragraphs ... of the [revised] essay," for example, one new ¶ expressing your favorites and recommendations just once, rather than repetitive information in numerous footnotes here.
Cheers, PB