2010年4月21日水曜日
BR- 1-02: The Pizza That We Made
I read " The Pizza That We Made". This story is about how to make a pizza. There are 3 characters. Suzanne, Max, and Jake. First they mixed the flour, and stired with a spoon. Next they mashed and pushed. And then they spread it in the pan. Finally they choped green things and went on top. It looks delicious. So I want to cook it next time.(68 words)
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Hi Sayaka,
返信削除When you make that pizza, would you please post a picture of it on your blog?
I also suggest that you use two or more labels for every post. On this one, I'd like to see "books, reviews" (separated by commas and without quotation marks), plus maybe "cooking" or "food" to capture the theme of this kind of post.
Thanks in advance for sharing what you learn from this comment with your classmates and peers.
Cheers.